07-28-2013, 08:04 AM
Hi,
I really enjoyed my reads of your poem. And with the unexpected ending, it made for a quite different read the second time. The repetition works for me, with the subject of matter, and with the fine simplicity of the poem. I have no crit. to offer.
Thanks for the read.
Best,
LB
I really enjoyed my reads of your poem. And with the unexpected ending, it made for a quite different read the second time. The repetition works for me, with the subject of matter, and with the fine simplicity of the poem. I have no crit. to offer.
Thanks for the read.
Best,
LB