Still havent figured the name

[R.C. KITCHENS]

I feel it floating, through me
I believe you could elaborate a little more on what "it" is. Currently, it doesn't work.

reminds of a river crying for the sea reminds me
I feel it burning around my wrists;
again "it" doesnt transist very well.
breaking the shackles, freeing me
What is it I feel? this line seems awkward to me


I seek it, In me
I found it many times, thou-
I've been deceived
I don't think "thou" is needed. I also think if you found it, you'd have a grasp on what it is. Beforehand, you didnt know what it was, now you find it many times.

It, at last, reached me
I can sense it,
It may remind you-
of a river,
crying for the sea
the above 4 lines don't really convey much. More de[th and imagery is needed.
The love it is I feellast line needs reworking

I think you got a concrete starting point to build a poem. You could adopt better imagery so it has some depth in it.