Verse-atility

[fim]

yes, i'm one of them, i love reading all kinds of poetry. the fun forum is one of my favourites. and i can understand why you hate me but you asked why i passed the poem over, and i felt you deserved an answer. i id read the poem all the way through by the way..

look fim. take something solid from feedback.

have a another attempt at doing this poem. i and others will gladly help you workshop the thing.

start off with a few stanza at first then add more if needed? the critics will say "needs expanding on" if that's the case.

and always give feedback, apart from reading it's your most effective tool for writing. what you see in other peoples poetry will be noticed in your own.

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and the fuck word is fine, and i appreciate that you wanted to but didn't it means more than you know.

Thank you billy. Taking the time to guide those farther than you from the light, toward the light ... well, what goes around comes around (I know, it is a cliché) ... anyway, thanks ... friend.
fim