Don't read if your own genitalia makes you squirm.
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I like the thick heightened language of the middle line of the middle stanza.

And the poem's gnarled tightness

The near rhymes are a little slippery, but maybe that's just you
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RE: Don't read if your own genitalia makes you squirm. - by rowens - 07-25-2013, 12:00 AM



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