Truth

[Magpie]

Hi, great subject matter. Not so sure about the form, at times it read like a piece of prose then it almost becomes more akin to a poem for a couple of lines, which overall threw me. And I agree that the "rumours spread by gossip" line could be more subtle.
The overall feel and subject matter reminds me very much of a Blake quote "A truth that's told with bad intent beats all the lies you can invent"
Thanks for the read,
Mark