07-24-2013, 09:56 PM
thanks again RC.. just using my original last two lines I quite like the look of ...certainly one I'll consider.
thanks again and to all who have contributed constructively and supportively , very much appreciated
RC with your suggestion for the last stanza would it not need "to" between not and know on the last line ?
Cheers guys
thanks again and to all who have contributed constructively and supportively , very much appreciated

RC with your suggestion for the last stanza would it not need "to" between not and know on the last line ?
Cheers guys

