first ever poem - friendship
#13
thanks again RC.. just using my original last two lines I quite like the look of ...certainly one I'll consider.

thanks again and to all who have contributed constructively and supportively , very much appreciated Smile

RC with your suggestion for the last stanza would it not need "to" between not and know on the last line ?

Cheers guys
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first ever poem - friendship - by nopoet62 - 07-21-2013, 04:58 AM
RE: first ever poem - friendship - by gdimonaco - 07-21-2013, 11:58 AM
RE: first ever poem - friendship - by nopoet62 - 07-22-2013, 03:31 AM
RE: first ever poem - friendship - by rowens - 07-22-2013, 04:09 AM
RE: first ever poem - friendship - by Magpie - 07-22-2013, 04:17 AM
RE: first ever poem - friendship - by nopoet62 - 07-22-2013, 04:28 AM
RE: first ever poem - friendship - by Magpie - 07-22-2013, 07:09 AM
RE: first ever poem - friendship - by jdguyb - 07-23-2013, 05:44 AM
RE: first ever poem - friendship - by nopoet62 - 07-23-2013, 05:48 AM
RE: first ever poem - friendship - by nopoet62 - 07-24-2013, 08:42 AM
RE: first ever poem - friendship - by nopoet62 - 07-24-2013, 09:56 PM



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