07-24-2013, 08:42 AM
OK so with couple of very slight re-workings... i feel I'm still not 100% happy with it and indeed the last stanza is not all it might be. I am, others potential reservations aside, quite happy with the last two lines..but the first two hmmmm
Friendship Poem
Our friendship is very special
We first met online
Our friendship began to grow
Now it feels sublime
We took a trip across the Border
Around an old Hopsital we did Wander
Much fun was had in that old building
Our friendship , it grew stronger
The Walk Through the field caused me distress
You took care of me, so caring
Many happy and fun times ahead
With you these times i will be sharing
Next we met was to capture your beauty
Once more we headed west
and had fun in that land
Times spent with you are the best
Remember when we crossed the water
We sat in a windmill just talking
You Were brave, honest and open
Just chilling and bonding
So what future our friendship
My life without you in it , Never
You light up my life,my soul
Our Friendship , It will be forever
Friendship Poem
Our friendship is very special
We first met online
Our friendship began to grow
Now it feels sublime
We took a trip across the Border
Around an old Hopsital we did Wander
Much fun was had in that old building
Our friendship , it grew stronger
The Walk Through the field caused me distress
You took care of me, so caring
Many happy and fun times ahead
With you these times i will be sharing
Next we met was to capture your beauty
Once more we headed west
and had fun in that land
Times spent with you are the best
Remember when we crossed the water
We sat in a windmill just talking
You Were brave, honest and open
Just chilling and bonding
So what future our friendship
My life without you in it , Never
You light up my life,my soul
Our Friendship , It will be forever