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Heartbroken
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07-23-2013, 07:54 AM
The darkness of this poem is overwhelming. I'm honestly scared reading it. I have nothing to say great poem. It flows nicely. Perfect rhythm. You perfectly described why everyone is killing themselves. That is what your trying to convey I hope. Unless I've missed something entirely.
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Heartbroken - by ireland4scots - 07-19-2013, 11:07 PM
RE: Heartbroken - by TheWall0912 - 07-20-2013, 12:04 AM
RE: Heartbroken - by ireland4scots - 07-20-2013, 08:26 AM
RE: Heartbroken - by cidermaid - 07-21-2013, 02:04 AM
RE: Heartbroken - by ireland4scots - 07-21-2013, 03:08 AM
RE: Heartbroken - by rowens - 07-21-2013, 03:12 AM
RE: Heartbroken - by Bunx - 07-21-2013, 07:08 AM
RE: Heartbroken - by ireland4scots - 07-21-2013, 09:19 AM
RE: Heartbroken - by Bunx - 07-22-2013, 01:59 AM
RE: Heartbroken - by jdguyb - 07-23-2013, 07:54 AM
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