07-23-2013, 06:36 AM
(07-23-2013, 06:23 AM)rayheinrich Wrote:I don't want to write a haiku
if you want to write haiku you should
include flowers and water and wood
contrast and compare
to twelve syllables pare
(and a third-line surprise would be good)
A poem? I suppose, but too few
Words, like a song
With one verse it's not long
Enough to get more than a view

