07-23-2013, 06:23 AM
if you want to write haiku you should
include flowers and water and wood
contrast and compare
to twelve syllables pare
(and a third-line surprise is quite good)
And, as always, responses in the form of poems and seemingly off-topic creative ramblings
that have nothing to do with the above poem are highly encouraged.
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions

