first ever poem - friendship

first ever poem - friendship

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07-23-2013, 05:44 AM

Well where to start. I wish the stanza about how you were in distress had more meaning. It should be a stronger point in the poem. Maybe explain how she cared for you. Maybe if you love her so much you should have another stanza telling her so. Grow some balls man

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first ever poem - friendship - by nopoet62 - 07-21-2013, 04:58 AM

RE: first ever poem - friendship - by gdimonaco - 07-21-2013, 11:58 AM

RE: first ever poem - friendship - by nopoet62 - 07-22-2013, 03:31 AM

RE: first ever poem - friendship - by rowens - 07-22-2013, 04:09 AM

RE: first ever poem - friendship - by Magpie - 07-22-2013, 04:17 AM

RE: first ever poem - friendship - by nopoet62 - 07-22-2013, 04:28 AM

RE: first ever poem - friendship - by Magpie - 07-22-2013, 07:09 AM

RE: first ever poem - friendship - by R.C. KITCHENS - 07-22-2013, 03:17 PM

RE: first ever poem - friendship - by jdguyb - 07-23-2013, 05:44 AM

RE: first ever poem - friendship - by nopoet62 - 07-23-2013, 05:48 AM

RE: first ever poem - friendship - by nopoet62 - 07-24-2013, 08:42 AM

RE: first ever poem - friendship - by R.C. KITCHENS - 07-24-2013, 02:10 PM

RE: first ever poem - friendship - by nopoet62 - 07-24-2013, 09:56 PM

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