07-23-2013, 05:34 AM
It seems a little random. Maybe some more organization. I see a couple lines that in themselves can be two lines. This would make the poem easier to read
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Love the honest feedback - by ElyseKelly - 07-22-2013, 09:01 AM
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RE: Love the honest feedback - by jdguyb - 07-23-2013, 05:34 AM
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