Remembrance Day - Please give honest critique, aspiring Poet!

Remembrance Day - Please give honest critique, aspiring Poet!

rowens
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07-22-2013, 03:51 AM

Several errors, and the rhyming's off and sloppy.

They told me not to give a line for line survey in this section. But many lines have at least one error.

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Remembrance Day - Please give honest critique, aspiring Poet! - by marmake94 - 07-21-2013, 04:54 PM

RE: Remembrance Day - Please give honest critique, aspiring Poet! - by Bunx - 07-22-2013, 02:02 AM

RE: Remembrance Day - Please give honest critique, aspiring Poet! - by rowens - 07-22-2013, 03:51 AM

RE: Remembrance Day - Please give honest critique, aspiring Poet! - by R.C. KITCHENS - 07-22-2013, 02:57 PM

RE: Remembrance Day - Please give honest critique, aspiring Poet! - by TheWall0912 - 07-23-2013, 04:22 AM

RE: Remembrance Day - Please give honest critique, aspiring Poet! - by jdguyb - 07-23-2013, 05:18 AM

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