Remembrance Day - Please give honest critique, aspiring Poet!
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Remembrance Day - Please give honest critique, aspiring Poet!
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07-22-2013, 02:02 AM
Very deep poem about the nature of war. The nature of the government for that matter. Perhaps you could expand on certain points you made in the second paragraph. I am curious to see what you think on the nature of government in war? hm another poem perhaps.
thanks you!
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Remembrance Day - Please give honest critique, aspiring Poet! - by marmake94 - 07-21-2013, 04:54 PM
RE: Remembrance Day - Please give honest critique, aspiring Poet! - by Bunx - 07-22-2013, 02:02 AM
RE: Remembrance Day - Please give honest critique, aspiring Poet! - by rowens - 07-22-2013, 03:51 AM
RE: Remembrance Day - Please give honest critique, aspiring Poet! - by R.C. KITCHENS - 07-22-2013, 02:57 PM
RE: Remembrance Day - Please give honest critique, aspiring Poet! - by TheWall0912 - 07-23-2013, 04:22 AM
RE: Remembrance Day - Please give honest critique, aspiring Poet! - by jdguyb - 07-23-2013, 05:18 AM
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