07-21-2013, 09:25 AM
i didn't want to use breaking back, and creaking felt old 
but i'll thing about it.
yeah, i put the comma after pa when it should have gone after like.
it is the American Midwest. back to the quaking back, i presumed after one had carried or toted a lot of bails there back would actually be shaking under the strain i'll take all your thought into consideration when doing an edit true, thanks for the feedback and for taking the time to read and reply. :J:
but i'll thing about it. yeah, i put the comma after pa when it should have gone after like.
it is the American Midwest. back to the quaking back, i presumed after one had carried or toted a lot of bails there back would actually be shaking under the strain
i'll take all your thought into consideration when doing an edit true, thanks for the feedback and for taking the time to read and reply. :J: