Truth
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The poem doesn't seem to "roll of the tongue," if you get my drift. I'm guessing that's purposely done, but the power behind the contrast to me is lost in that sense. Yet the concept is a good one.
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Truth - by TruthfulLies - 07-20-2013, 05:32 PM
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