Still havent figured the name

[tectak]

I feel it floating, through meIt? It? What is this it? you need to demonstrate an abilty to describe the indefinite in some more accomplished way. You tell me little of consequence and nothing of your own intent. We have a floating thing flowing...two counter-intuitive parameters. What are you trying to say?
reminds of a river crying for the sea reminds ME. Sloppy editing if at all.
I feel it burning around my wrists;
breaking the shackles, freeing me
What is it I feel? I can understand why you have no title.

I seek it, In mewhy capital In. These errors are tedious. Read the rules of Serious before posting.
I found it many times, thou-
I've been deceivedUtter tripe.thou-I've?

It, at last, reached me
I can sense it,
It may remind you- Do some work yourself. Find out what a hyphen is for
of a river,
crying for the sea
The love it is I feel ....when all has failed, end on a flourish of Yoda

Hi sonata,
Not having a title is symptomatic of what is wrong with this effort. I am very much gladdened by your self-promoted ability at making "awesome" signatures but could you just for once concentrate on your poetry.
I know you cannot take crit but if you really want to improve you MUST listen . This is abominably boring and really, and I see your problem, not worthy of a title.
Not many are prepared to comment on your stuff for fear of an hysterical rebuttal but as I only care about the poetry I am immune.
Read your work. Make sure that you are concept-clear. Write in precise terms ( even poetic licence permits for that) and stop being a prima donna. It is affecting your poetry.
Oh, when I said you must listen....I didn't mean to me. A bargepole-distant plangent bell tolls forlornly over your efforts....it is the sound of silence..is that what you want?
Best,
tectak