Heartbroken

[ireland4scots]

Note from Mod;
I saw your question. Is this the poem you were thinking of moving?
If so which forum board would you like it moved to? (Perhaps the novice section for some medium depth crit)
Back in 4hrs will look in and move if required.

Although you already have two poems running in the novice thread. Perhaps give it a few days and spend some time focusing on what feedback is given and look at some edits on these first. (This poem can still be moved with any comments gathered in this posting).

I would like this one moved, but thanks for the concern

Done.
Don't forget to leave some comments on other poems in one of the workshoping threads. AJ.