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Heartbroken
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07-20-2013, 08:26 AM
(07-20-2013, 12:04 AM)TheWall0912 Wrote: One word: Wow. The ending is really powerful in my opinion. I really liked it. Only question is, why switch the big and small in the second line? It doesn't bother me though. Great poemThanks for your response  , and I decided that I would counter the set up between the first and second paragraph to indicate the change in mood. And again, thanks for the feedback 
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Heartbroken - by ireland4scots - 07-19-2013, 11:07 PM
RE: Heartbroken - by TheWall0912 - 07-20-2013, 12:04 AM
RE: Heartbroken - by ireland4scots - 07-20-2013, 08:26 AM
RE: Heartbroken - by cidermaid - 07-21-2013, 02:04 AM
RE: Heartbroken - by ireland4scots - 07-21-2013, 03:08 AM
RE: Heartbroken - by rowens - 07-21-2013, 03:12 AM
RE: Heartbroken - by Bunx - 07-21-2013, 07:08 AM
RE: Heartbroken - by ireland4scots - 07-21-2013, 09:19 AM
RE: Heartbroken - by Bunx - 07-22-2013, 01:59 AM
RE: Heartbroken - by jdguyb - 07-23-2013, 07:54 AM
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