07-20-2013, 05:57 AM
(07-19-2013, 09:51 PM)Brownlie Wrote: I'm with Milo on the allusions. It reads quite smoothly, I think the tetrameter might work better than pentameter because it connects the rhymes quicker.you are correct in that tetrameter is the best choice for this poem. Leanne takes her silly verse very seriously so she picked tetrameter because it automatically lends a sense of fun and whimsy to this vill. This was the author's choice and it was calculated and deliberate.
You might do well to try a couple of silly vills to help you learn the form, they are great.