in a cloak of fallen leaves

[Heartafire]

This is a gem rayhenrich, you have a wonderful flair for the exotic. I have forsaken the criteria regarding Kigo and syllables. I left a senryu at another forum and to my surprise someone picked up on it and began a senryu train that now has nearly 40,000 posts in my thread. This was my initial senryu that initiated the train:

One Breath

Spill your silver stars
for my ears a golden moon
heady heart murmurs

It think it would be fun to have a haiku/senryu train here. I am most impressed with your writing and think this is
one of the loveliest haiku I have read.
My best,
Heart