in a cloak of fallen leaves
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in a cloak of fallen leaves
spring, summer, fall
forgotten



'Real' haiku may only contain one kigo (season word).
But it is permissible for haiku to contain the actual words
that represent other kigo as long as the writer has made it
possible for the reader to logically determine which one
is the real kigo. This can be made obvious (as above), or,
in the case of riddles, one that can only be revealed by
using complex reasoning combined with head pounding.
(I'm still trying to find/make one of the latter.)

Feel free to try.

And, as always, haiku poem responses and creative rambling that
has nothing to do with the above poem (but remains within the
topic of haiku) are not only welcome, but highly encouraged.)

                                                                                                                a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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in a cloak of fallen leaves - by rayheinrich - 07-20-2013, 02:16 AM
RE: in a cloak of fallen leaves - by Heartafire - 07-20-2013, 04:33 AM
RE: in a cloak of fallen leaves - by rayheinrich - 07-20-2013, 05:24 AM
RE: in a cloak of fallen leaves - by cidermaid - 07-20-2013, 05:47 AM
RE: in a cloak of fallen leaves - by rayheinrich - 07-20-2013, 06:57 AM
RE: in a cloak of fallen leaves - by cidermaid - 07-20-2013, 07:31 AM
RE: in a cloak of fallen leaves - by rayheinrich - 07-20-2013, 07:47 AM
RE: in a cloak of fallen leaves - by Malu - 09-22-2013, 08:01 AM
RE: in a cloak of fallen leaves - by rayheinrich - 09-22-2013, 09:22 PM
RE: in a cloak of fallen leaves - by Erthona - 09-22-2013, 10:30 PM
RE: in a cloak of fallen leaves - by rayheinrich - 09-22-2013, 10:38 PM
RE: in a cloak of fallen leaves - by Erthona - 09-23-2013, 06:40 AM
RE: in a cloak of fallen leaves - by billy - 09-23-2013, 01:02 PM
RE: in a cloak of fallen leaves - by Erthona - 09-23-2013, 08:41 PM



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