If I Could go to Heaven
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(07-19-2013, 09:45 PM)TheWall0912 Wrote:  If I could go to heaven,
I'd hope that you'd hear,
I'm looking for you
and am very near.

If I could go to heaven,
I'd want you to see,
I am the person
you'd want me to be.

If I could go to heaven,
I'd hope that you'd feel
happy, as we embrace.
This time it's real.

If I could go to heaven,
I'd want you to know,
I tried really hard
and hope it does show.

If I could go to heaven,
I'd hope that you'd say,
"Hello my darling,
you turned out okay."
This reminds me of that Eric Clapton song Tears in Heaven, which isn't half bad, but I think you can go deeper than this with poetry. Thumbsup
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Messages In This Thread
If I Could go to Heaven - by TheWall0912 - 07-19-2013, 09:45 PM
RE: If I Could go to Heaven - by Brownlie - 07-19-2013, 11:21 PM
RE: If I Could go to Heaven - by nopoet62 - 07-21-2013, 04:27 AM
RE: If I Could go to Heaven - by ElyseKelly - 07-22-2013, 08:49 AM
RE: If I Could go to Heaven - by Volaticus - 07-22-2013, 10:24 AM
RE: If I Could go to Heaven - by milo - 07-22-2013, 11:24 AM
RE: If I Could go to Heaven - by R.C. KITCHENS - 07-22-2013, 03:04 PM
RE: If I Could go to Heaven - by jdguyb - 07-23-2013, 05:47 AM



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