07-19-2013, 11:21 PM
(07-19-2013, 09:45 PM)TheWall0912 Wrote: If I could go to heaven,This reminds me of that Eric Clapton song Tears in Heaven, which isn't half bad, but I think you can go deeper than this with poetry.
I'd hope that you'd hear,
I'm looking for you
and am very near.
If I could go to heaven,
I'd want you to see,
I am the person
you'd want me to be.
If I could go to heaven,
I'd hope that you'd feel
happy, as we embrace.
This time it's real.
If I could go to heaven,
I'd want you to know,
I tried really hard
and hope it does show.
If I could go to heaven,
I'd hope that you'd say,
"Hello my darling,
you turned out okay."

