07-19-2013, 05:41 PM
All the personal pronouns get tedious quick, I would cut as many out as you can. And, yah, the cliches are a deal breaker.
Plus, The Dark Knight is Batman. Don't make me write another Batman and Robin sonnet, it won't be pretty . . .
Plus, The Dark Knight is Batman. Don't make me write another Batman and Robin sonnet, it won't be pretty . . .