07-19-2013, 10:14 AM
i know it's about a comic book hero and that possible lays it open for all the cliche stuff that runs through the poem.
but it doesn't work, the poem feels comicy (is that a word?)
He would sit on a throne of bone
my partner's done the same thing many times over
okay sorry for the wisecrack but it's more or less a list poem of clichés.
but it doesn't work, the poem feels comicy (is that a word?)
He would sit on a throne of bone
my partner's done the same thing many times over
okay sorry for the wisecrack but it's more or less a list poem of clichés.