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The Dark Knight

Volaticus Offline

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07-19-2013, 08:20 AM

Hi,
I wonder if there's a reason that you left out any sorts of punctuation?
It would make it easier to read with some commas and periods.
Best,
LB

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The Dark Knight - by jdguyb - 07-18-2013, 06:41 AM

RE: The Dark Knight - by Volaticus - 07-19-2013, 08:20 AM

RE: The Dark Knight - by billy - 07-19-2013, 10:14 AM

RE: The Dark Knight - by milo - 07-19-2013, 05:41 PM

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