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07-19-2013, 07:00 AM

(07-19-2013, 06:59 AM)rowens Wrote: I'll think about the clarity. Awkwardness and carelessness in phrasing is something that I find necessary. I use these critique sections to see what happens. But not often

The butchered grammar, I don't know.

I'm thinking about it all.

happy to help.

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Generic Relationships - by rowens - 07-18-2013, 01:26 AM

RE: Generic Relationships - by Brownlie - 07-18-2013, 02:02 AM

RE: Generic Relationships - by rowens - 07-18-2013, 04:47 AM

RE: Generic Relationships - by billy - 07-18-2013, 07:48 AM

RE: Generic Relationships - by rowens - 07-19-2013, 05:23 AM

RE: Generic Relationships - by Leanne - 07-19-2013, 05:46 AM

RE: Generic Relationships - by rowens - 07-19-2013, 05:49 AM

RE: Generic Relationships - by Leanne - 07-19-2013, 05:54 AM

RE: Generic Relationships - by rowens - 07-19-2013, 05:57 AM

RE: Generic Relationships - by milo - 07-19-2013, 06:26 AM

RE: Generic Relationships - by rowens - 07-19-2013, 06:39 AM

RE: Generic Relationships - by milo - 07-19-2013, 06:42 AM

RE: Generic Relationships - by rowens - 07-19-2013, 06:59 AM

RE: Generic Relationships - by milo - 07-19-2013, 07:00 AM

RE: Generic Relationships - by rowens - 07-19-2013, 07:03 AM

RE: Generic Relationships - by Bunx - 07-19-2013, 07:21 AM

RE: Generic Relationships - by rowens - 07-19-2013, 07:25 AM

RE: Generic Relationships - by DeviousKid45 - 07-24-2013, 12:48 AM

RE: Generic Relationships - by rowens - 07-24-2013, 10:50 PM

RE: Generic Relationships - by tectak - 07-25-2013, 12:07 AM

RE: Generic Relationships - by rowens - 07-25-2013, 12:58 AM

RE: Generic Relationships - by newsclippings - 07-25-2013, 02:26 AM

RE: Generic Relationships - by rowens - 07-25-2013, 02:32 AM

RE: Generic Relationships - by Bunx - 07-25-2013, 07:29 AM

RE: Generic Relationships - by billy - 07-25-2013, 08:13 AM

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