The Soft Cocoon

[billy]

i'm getting that your snuggled up with a book, or at least that my take on the poem, but if you using the book as a portal, isn't there something more, or does it just lead up to you telling us your reading a book. i'm not sure how to say what i mean surely the book has a lot more going on than an idyll of the sea.

it's a soothing poem though i don't get a lot from it.

thanks for the read.

The Soft Cocoon

An ocean crawling to shore, a suggestion would be to remove shore as it's too obvious
waves whispering,
are you here? if you're personifying , why not use quotation marks and have such lines out on their own line

A seagull descends,
cooing softly, is cooing associated with gulls?
do you hear me?

The sun walks the sky,
repainting, reacquainting.

The world exhales;
a page flutters frantically
in the breeze.

This I see.
This I hear.

Inside, undisturbed,
I continue to read
about a man
who loved summer.