A Passing

A Passing

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07-18-2013, 11:09 AM

if i change the the first A rhyme i'll change the last one as well so that would be a problem. and you could be right with musk. i'll let it stand a while and do an edit in a week or so

thanks for the input tom

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A Passing - by billy - 07-05-2013, 06:42 PM

RE: A Passing - by Heartafire - 07-05-2013, 10:00 PM

RE: A Passing - by billy - 07-06-2013, 07:31 AM

RE: A Passing - by milo - 07-06-2013, 09:20 AM

RE: A Passing - by billy - 07-06-2013, 04:12 PM

RE: A Passing - by Brownlie - 07-06-2013, 01:18 AM

RE: A Passing - by tectak - 07-06-2013, 01:59 AM

RE: A Passing - by R.C. KITCHENS - 07-06-2013, 03:25 AM

RE: A Passing - by milo - 07-06-2013, 05:21 AM

RE: A Passing - by Leanne - 07-06-2013, 06:49 AM

RE: A Passing - by TRLustig - 07-06-2013, 03:47 PM

RE: A Passing - by Leanne - 07-06-2013, 07:06 PM

RE: A Passing - by tectak - 07-06-2013, 11:42 PM

RE: A Passing - by Brownlie - 07-07-2013, 12:18 AM

RE: A Passing - by billy - 07-17-2013, 06:18 PM

RE: A Passing - by tectak - 07-17-2013, 07:34 PM

RE: A Passing - by billy - 07-18-2013, 07:26 AM

RE: A Passing - by tectak - 07-18-2013, 07:38 AM

RE: A Passing - by Brownlie - 07-17-2013, 10:01 PM

RE: A Passing - by billy - 07-18-2013, 11:09 AM

RE: A Passing - by tectak - 07-18-2013, 08:11 PM

RE: A Passing - by billy - 07-18-2013, 08:49 PM

RE: A Passing - by milo - 07-19-2013, 07:14 AM

RE: A Passing - by billy - 07-19-2013, 10:22 AM

RE: A Passing - by milo - 07-20-2013, 09:40 AM

RE: A Passing - by billy - 07-29-2013, 03:24 PM

RE: A Passing - by heslopian - 07-29-2013, 10:43 PM

RE: A Passing - by billy - 07-30-2013, 07:37 AM

RE: A Passing - by serge gurkski - 08-02-2013, 09:10 AM

RE: A Passing - by billy - 08-02-2013, 09:58 AM

RE: A Passing - by ray - 08-03-2013, 02:45 AM

RE: A Passing - by billy - 08-08-2013, 06:21 PM

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