07-18-2013, 01:54 AM
Not perfect in my opinion, but I could use some insight from people who browse this part of the forum. Not trying to waste anyone's time.
Fall:
Olive colored leaves of spring bloom in autumn.
When green, the leaves absorb the sun that’s sent
Falling down as white light atoms through a prism.
Combustible leaves quickly burn a passionate spasm.
Ephemeral bursts of vibrancy are spent.
Olive colored leaves of spring bloom in autumn.
Tourists come to see leaves in their dying stardom.
The bursting stars of blonde and red that went
Falling down as white light atoms through a prism.
Cement steps that sit before the catechism
Have leafy blankets from the descent.
Olive colored leaves of spring bloom in autumn.
On ground the burned out stars sit post-mortem.
The stiffened dead crunch under feet as portents
That fell down as white light atoms through a prism.
The bursting color surges quickly. Carpe diem
Must have seized the leaves, they must have been hell-bent.
Olive colored leaves of spring bloom in autumn.
That fell down as white light atoms through a prism.
Fall:
Olive colored leaves of spring bloom in autumn.
When green, the leaves absorb the sun that’s sent
Falling down as white light atoms through a prism.
Combustible leaves quickly burn a passionate spasm.
Ephemeral bursts of vibrancy are spent.
Olive colored leaves of spring bloom in autumn.
Tourists come to see leaves in their dying stardom.
The bursting stars of blonde and red that went
Falling down as white light atoms through a prism.
Cement steps that sit before the catechism
Have leafy blankets from the descent.
Olive colored leaves of spring bloom in autumn.
On ground the burned out stars sit post-mortem.
The stiffened dead crunch under feet as portents
That fell down as white light atoms through a prism.
The bursting color surges quickly. Carpe diem
Must have seized the leaves, they must have been hell-bent.
Olive colored leaves of spring bloom in autumn.
That fell down as white light atoms through a prism.

