07-17-2013, 11:59 AM
This is really well written! It puts all of my poems to shame. I liked the imagery and your word choice. And of course, as others have said, your ending is awesome!
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The Allure of the Tempest (1st Edit) - by fim - 07-01-2013, 01:20 AM
RE: The Allure of the Tempest - by allykat727 - 07-01-2013, 02:57 PM
RE: The Allure of the Tempest - by fim - 07-01-2013, 08:54 PM
RE: The Allure of the Tempest - by allykat727 - 07-02-2013, 07:37 AM
RE: The Allure of the Tempest - by cidermaid - 07-06-2013, 02:50 AM
RE: The Allure of the Tempest - by fim - 07-07-2013, 09:22 AM
RE: The Allure of the Tempest - by serge gurkski - 07-07-2013, 11:55 PM
RE: The Allure of the Tempest - by c.gutzwiller - 07-12-2013, 12:56 PM
RE: The Allure of the Tempest - by fim - 07-13-2013, 10:31 PM
RE: The Allure of the Tempest - by jdguyb - 07-16-2013, 12:43 AM
RE: The Allure of the Tempest - by carassiusauratus - 07-16-2013, 11:48 AM
RE: The Allure of the Tempest - by fim - 07-17-2013, 08:14 AM
RE: The Allure of the Tempest (1st Edit) - by TheWall0912 - 07-17-2013, 11:59 AM
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