(content warning) Blackpool Tryst

(content warning) Blackpool Tryst

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07-17-2013, 08:57 AM

(07-17-2013, 08:49 AM)Heslopian Wrote: Thank you for your kind and helpful critique, Brownlie Is there a word that you might suggest instead of anus, or would you remove the whole line?

Personally, I would get rid of it. I think it is your call though.

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(content warning) Blackpool Tryst - by heslopian - 07-17-2013, 08:19 AM

RE: (content warning) Blackpool Tryst - by Brownlie - 07-17-2013, 08:33 AM

RE: (content warning) Blackpool Tryst - by heslopian - 07-17-2013, 08:49 AM

RE: (content warning) Blackpool Tryst - by Brownlie - 07-17-2013, 08:57 AM

RE: (content warning) Blackpool Tryst - by heslopian - 07-17-2013, 09:06 AM

RE: (content warning) Blackpool Tryst - by billy - 07-17-2013, 09:21 AM

RE: (content warning) Blackpool Tryst - by tectak - 07-17-2013, 07:44 PM

RE: (content warning) Blackpool Tryst - by heslopian - 07-17-2013, 09:24 AM

RE: (content warning) Blackpool Tryst - by Vistaldust - 07-17-2013, 09:59 AM

RE: (content warning) Blackpool Tryst - by heslopian - 07-17-2013, 10:01 AM

RE: (content warning) Blackpool Tryst - by Vistaldust - 07-17-2013, 10:07 AM

RE: (content warning) Blackpool Tryst - by newsclippings - 07-17-2013, 02:10 PM

RE: (content warning) Blackpool Tryst - by heslopian - 07-17-2013, 07:10 PM

RE: (content warning) Blackpool Tryst - by billy - 07-17-2013, 07:21 PM

RE: (content warning) Blackpool Tryst - by heslopian - 07-17-2013, 08:55 PM

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