new years, spring, summer, fall, winter photographs

[billy]

new years, spring, summer, fall, winter photographs
you jumping into
(sound of water)

and:

old pound
spring jumps in
(sound of frogs)

i think the line between form and experimental has been drawn in the sand by ray in this one.

fantastic write ray it's extremely well done and very very clever how you explain it's birth.
unless it a senryu then, i'd have to say;

i think the line between form and experimental has been drawn in the sand by ray in this one.

fantastic write ray it's extremely well done and very very clever how you explain it's birth.

unless it's a senryu and at the same time a haiku, in which case i say;

i think the line between form and experimental has been drawn in the sand by ray in this one.

fantastic write ray it's extremely well done and very very clever how you explain it's birth.