left behind (thank you tec, fogglethorpe & Brownlie)

[Heartafire]

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Hi heart,
I'm late to the party but just wanted to say that I felt you have painted some lovely pictures which are subtly suggestive in all the right ways. Your words have the effect of being a silk dress, they drap and cover what is hidden underneath...but only just. I like what you have done in the edits those couple of word changes tighten and polish - your poem now glows!.

Hi Cider, thank you for the very encouraging comments. Why didn't I think of this "...a silk dress, they drap and cover what is hidden underneath...but only just" beautiful expression.
I must credit fogglethorpe with the fine edits.
My best,
Heart

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I'm too partial to Heart's writing. Her poems are (like) kisses from my lover. Can they ever be too wet, too intense, too horny? I don't think so.
so: I simply cannot and will not "criticise" them.

cheers
serge

The feeling is mutual, bebe. btw, love the new avatar, you are adorable, and say the hottest things (fans self).
hugs,
Heart