07-17-2013, 05:16 AM
Hi heart,
I'm late to the party but just wanted to say that I felt you have painted some lovely pictures which are subtly suggestive in all the right ways. Your words have the effect of being a silk dress, they drap and cover what is hidden underneath...but only just. I like what you have done in the edits those couple of word changes tighten and polish - your poem now glows!.
I'm late to the party but just wanted to say that I felt you have painted some lovely pictures which are subtly suggestive in all the right ways. Your words have the effect of being a silk dress, they drap and cover what is hidden underneath...but only just. I like what you have done in the edits those couple of word changes tighten and polish - your poem now glows!.