I Dressed In White
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(07-17-2013, 02:21 AM)TheWall0912 Wrote:  Nerves engulfed me from head to toe Engulfed in nerves head to toe
I had doubts but you'd never know
Freshly picked flowers were clutched in my hand
Repeatedly telling myself you were the right man this seems to lose the flow, perhaps drop repeatedly
My dad held my arm to give me away
He knew his little girl could no longer stay
The look when you saw me was pure admiration
As I walked down the aisle with anticipation

In your tuxedo you stood tall and proud
Smiling as "The Wedding March" played out loud do you need "as" or "out loud"?
The rings were out the rings were exchanged?
We exchanged vows we spoke our vows
I said "I do."
And so did you
Sweet love story. A few suggestions for input to be binned
at will. I see you deferred on punctuation, doesn't bother me.
My best,
Heart


Messages In This Thread
I Dressed In White - by TheWall0912 - 07-17-2013, 02:21 AM
RE: I Dressed In White - by Heartafire - 07-17-2013, 02:45 AM
RE: I Dressed In White - by FayandFire - 07-18-2013, 07:55 AM
RE: I Dressed In White - by TheWall0912 - 07-18-2013, 11:36 PM



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