07-15-2013, 08:34 AM
it creates a sort of symbiotic relationship between child and mother and makes for a decent senryu.
the last line moves enough away from the 1st two and makes a good last line. though it is cliche i don't think it matters in this instance as it's a statement of fact and hope.
the last line moves enough away from the 1st two and makes a good last line. though it is cliche i don't think it matters in this instance as it's a statement of fact and hope.