King and Queen

[jdguyb]

Jd,
Been reading this repeatedly. I am confused about what you wish your queen to be for the reader. I will make some notes above.

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King and Queen
Dancing in infinity
I see the cosmos swirling. [b]this is a very nice beginning
Almost magical
But just another extension
Of gods sweet grace
I see my queen, so beautiful
She watches over me
I feel her hand guiding mine. [/b]this implies your queen is more of a spiritual guide
So impressionable
She is mine and I am hers
Best friends, King and Queen. this line indicates she is an equal partner, very human[b]
Until the end
Until the end
Until the end

thanks for the critic!