Nighttime Blue

[Brownlie]

Oh summers breeze, caress me with ease.
Fireflies fly ‘round my mind,
and entwine me with Earth divine.

Spiritually, the sky sings to me as its
Nighttime blue hue blankets the trees.

Tonight the Orchestra is out
Cricket Waltz in C major serenades me.
oh sweet Jiminy I love your symphony

It is good writing but I feel as if you are about to get blind sided and smacked in the head. I saw a cute little dog the other day and it yelped and a man rigidly smacked it. All he cared about was quieting the yelping dog.