Gosh that's pretty. It's exotic and tranquil.
I wonder if there might be a better word than 'then' for the last line... I was thinking along the lines of 'breathe Enlightenment' but that's probably too cheesy, which is why I don't write 'ku
I wonder if there might be a better word than 'then' for the last line... I was thinking along the lines of 'breathe Enlightenment' but that's probably too cheesy, which is why I don't write 'ku
It could be worse