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LaughGiraffe Offline

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07-14-2013, 11:15 AM

I'm a sucker for rhyme so kuddos. And I think the repetitive first lines are very effective. I think it would be even better if you sort of elaborated. Like why are the daylight hours empty and what makes sleep so meaningful?

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empty hours - by neskozhu - 07-14-2013, 02:18 AM

RE: empty hours - by cidermaid - 07-14-2013, 02:42 AM

RE: empty hours - by tirnanog - 07-14-2013, 06:56 AM

RE: empty hours - by LaughGiraffe - 07-14-2013, 11:15 AM

RE: empty hours - by neskozhu - 07-14-2013, 03:22 PM

RE: empty hours - by R.C. KITCHENS - 07-14-2013, 04:04 PM

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