From blossom to bottle (Edit 2)

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From blossom to bottle (Edit 2)

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07-14-2013, 05:15 AM

I'm happy tec liked your poem, he is quite picky so you have achieved something there but I still think lines like snip-snipped make your work sound nonsensical like Doctor Seus, but the entrapment of the kitchen and marital life are compelling themes to an idealist such as me... Smile

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From blossom to bottle (Edit 2) - by cidermaid - 07-07-2013, 10:10 PM

Blosom to bottle (Edit 3) - by Brownlie - 07-08-2013, 12:51 AM

RE: From blossom to bottle - by R.C. KITCHENS - 07-08-2013, 01:20 PM

RE: From blossom to bottle - by cidermaid - 07-08-2013, 07:41 PM

RE: From blossom to bottle - by tectak - 07-11-2013, 01:15 AM

RE: From blossom to bottle - by cidermaid - 07-11-2013, 02:04 AM

RE: From blossom to bottle - by tectak - 07-11-2013, 03:29 AM

RE: From blossom to bottle (Edit 2) - by cidermaid - 07-12-2013, 05:28 AM

RE: From blossom to bottle (Edit 2) - by tectak - 07-12-2013, 05:01 PM

RE: From blossom to bottle (Edit 2) - by cidermaid - 07-12-2013, 05:51 PM

RE: From blossom to bottle (Edit 2) - by tectak - 07-12-2013, 10:47 PM

RE: From blossom to bottle (Edit 2) - by cidermaid - 07-12-2013, 10:52 PM

RE: From blossom to bottle (Edit 2) - by tectak - 07-14-2013, 11:05 PM

RE: From blossom to bottle (Edit 2) - by Brownlie - 07-13-2013, 01:32 AM

RE: From blossom to bottle (Edit 2) - by cidermaid - 07-13-2013, 01:45 AM

RE: From blossom to bottle (Edit 2) - by Lauren Greenwood - 07-13-2013, 06:43 AM

RE: From blossom to bottle (Edit 2) - by tectak - 07-13-2013, 09:27 PM

RE: From blossom to bottle (Edit 2) - by cidermaid - 07-14-2013, 02:08 AM

RE: From blossom to bottle (Edit 2) - by tectak - 07-14-2013, 04:11 AM

RE: From blossom to bottle (Edit 2) - by Brownlie - 07-14-2013, 05:15 AM

RE: From blossom to bottle (Edit 2) - by cidermaid - 07-14-2013, 05:24 AM

RE: From blossom to bottle (Edit 2) - by Brownlie - 07-14-2013, 05:26 AM

RE: From blossom to bottle (Edit 2) - by Vistaldust - 07-14-2013, 06:04 AM

RE: From blossom to bottle (Edit 2) - by cidermaid - 07-15-2013, 09:24 PM

RE: From blossom to bottle (Edit 2) - by tectak - 07-18-2013, 01:23 AM

RE: From blossom to bottle (Edit 2) - by soonforgotten? - 07-26-2013, 01:33 AM

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