07-13-2013, 06:29 AM
Hey 
brutally honest input wanted, aside from spelling etc, thank you so much.
"Broken"
My mind is pacing, heart racing, . is it skipping beats? I've lost count to daydreaming, lost time to scheming, some may say a soul without a meaning.
anticipation... our creation: an alternate universe, but baby don't you know that you're my curse?
but lets rehears,
you play your part n' ill play mine, breath in breath out and I know that you're mine. you're my addiction.
we can buy a little time, attraction or distraction? what you need, not want you want, take your time baby, it's priceless.
livin a lie baby, I can tell that you're lonely.
I'll let you in, you cant take whats been given, It's you, you I want. So simple I don't ask for much, the way you make me feel I need to be a part of you.
So lay me down to rest , with my head apon your chest, tell me what I want to hear, please don't break my heart, dont tell me what I fear
I barely know you but you know me, I'm your addiction.
brutally honest input wanted, aside from spelling etc, thank you so much. "Broken"
My mind is pacing, heart racing, . is it skipping beats? I've lost count to daydreaming, lost time to scheming, some may say a soul without a meaning.
anticipation... our creation: an alternate universe, but baby don't you know that you're my curse?
but lets rehears,
you play your part n' ill play mine, breath in breath out and I know that you're mine. you're my addiction.
we can buy a little time, attraction or distraction? what you need, not want you want, take your time baby, it's priceless.
livin a lie baby, I can tell that you're lonely.
I'll let you in, you cant take whats been given, It's you, you I want. So simple I don't ask for much, the way you make me feel I need to be a part of you.
So lay me down to rest , with my head apon your chest, tell me what I want to hear, please don't break my heart, dont tell me what I fear
I barely know you but you know me, I'm your addiction.