The Replacer

[alexaomame]

Hey,

I'm not sure what you mean by lack is the replacer. Is it the lack of smell replaces the shit? Without understanding that ÇI sort of loose out on the rest of the poem.

Haha I thought it was pretty obvious that the shit was a metaphor...and a pretty direct one? I suppose that's why it's good to get feedback, to see how people perceive it. Thanks.

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It kind of reminds me of the poetry of Richard Brautigan. Check him it and see if you agree. I enjoyed it and the ambiguous ending!

Thank you so much! I'll definitely be checking him out!