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(07-11-2013, 01:19 AM)rayheinrich Wrote:  
(07-10-2013, 07:23 PM)cidermaid Wrote:  Hi Ray,
I gave this a 6.5 on my smile O-metre for the text and a 7 for the pic.
Your poetry + pictures brightens my day.

Silly quip that your pic made me think of:

The face of the bloke on my toast
is worth a fortune on ebay.
Sadly he's now toast
I ate him for tea today.

Thanks AJ.


Smile

There once was a toaster from Texas
Whose toast was a religious nexus
When an image appeared
Of a god most revered
Its attraction was wildly infectious

I think the meter is botched on the limerick. Also Jesus was black.
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Messages In This Thread
< forgiven > - by rayheinrich - 07-10-2013, 07:04 PM
RE: < forgiven > - by cidermaid - 07-10-2013, 07:23 PM
RE: < forgiven > - by rayheinrich - 07-11-2013, 01:19 AM
RE: < forgiven > - by Brownlie - 07-11-2013, 01:28 AM
RE: < forgiven > - by serge gurkski - 07-10-2013, 08:23 PM
RE: < forgiven > - by cidermaid - 07-11-2013, 01:38 AM
RE: < forgiven > - by Brownlie - 07-11-2013, 02:00 AM
RE: < forgiven > - by cidermaid - 07-11-2013, 02:12 AM
RE: < forgiven > - by Brownlie - 07-11-2013, 02:35 AM
RE: < forgiven > - by rayheinrich - 07-17-2013, 02:39 PM
RE: < forgiven > - by serge gurkski - 07-22-2013, 11:32 PM
RE: < forgiven > - by rayheinrich - 07-23-2013, 04:52 AM



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