Adam's Choice edit 1
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apparently you can have half a foot missing if you end on a feminine syllable (though don't take my word for it)
however, you have a half foot too much which i'm pretty sure is a half foot to many. that you call it a transgression implies you didn't mean to do it, if that's the case then change it, if you did mean to to do it, then question is begged; "why"
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Adam's Choice edit 1 - by Brownlie - 07-09-2013, 11:19 AM
RE: Adam's Choice - by cidermaid - 07-10-2013, 07:31 AM
RE: Adam's Choice - by billy - 07-10-2013, 07:52 AM
RE: Adam's Choice edit 1 - by Brownlie - 07-10-2013, 08:18 AM
RE: Adam's Choice edit 1 - by billy - 07-10-2013, 10:01 AM
RE: Adam's Choice edit 1 - by milo - 07-10-2013, 10:41 AM
RE: Adam's Choice edit 1 - by billy - 07-10-2013, 10:51 AM
RE: Adam's Choice edit 1 - by milo - 07-10-2013, 11:16 AM
RE: Adam's Choice edit 1 - by Brownlie - 07-10-2013, 11:50 AM
RE: Adam's Choice edit 1 - by billy - 07-10-2013, 11:35 AM



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