"Those Old 78s"
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(07-10-2013, 07:16 AM)Vistaldust Wrote:  "Those Old 78s".

Play oh violin through vinyl's despair.
Give your lament to the open air.
Glenn Miller's pain bursts boldly through your veins,
while a trombone crackles cold and clear,
through the mystic grace of those big band days.


Just a short little thing I wrote about 20 years ago, not meant to seriously critiqued. Basically, it's shit, but every once in awhile it's nice to post something that I truly know to be shitty, instead of being in denial, as is customary.
Those big band leaders were the pin ups of their day, its not shitty, I quite like to read about reactions to music and it conveys the image of the 78 really well. but not sure about mystic and oh Wink TOMH

If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
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"Those Old 78s" - by Vistaldust - 07-10-2013, 07:16 AM
RE: "Those Old 78s" - by Keith - 07-10-2013, 08:35 AM
RE: "Those Old 78s" - by billy - 07-10-2013, 09:56 AM
RE: "Those Old 78s" - by Vistaldust - 07-11-2013, 01:06 AM
RE: "Those Old 78s" - by Vistaldust - 07-11-2013, 08:31 AM
Those Old 78s. Edit - by Vistaldust - 07-11-2013, 02:16 AM
RE: Those Old 78s. Edit - by cidermaid - 07-11-2013, 02:39 AM
RE: Those Old 78s. Edit - by Vistaldust - 07-11-2013, 02:47 AM



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