Adam's Choice edit 1

Adam's Choice edit 1

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07-10-2013, 08:18 AM

Thank you Billy and Cider I made some edits before I saw your comments but they are all appreciated and I will consider them later. The near-rhymes are definitely a fault. Is the metrical transgression worth it? I couldn't tell you for sure. Thumbsup

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Adam's Choice edit 1 - by Brownlie - 07-09-2013, 11:19 AM

RE: Adam's Choice - by cidermaid - 07-10-2013, 07:31 AM

RE: Adam's Choice - by billy - 07-10-2013, 07:52 AM

RE: Adam's Choice edit 1 - by Brownlie - 07-10-2013, 08:18 AM

RE: Adam's Choice edit 1 - by billy - 07-10-2013, 10:01 AM

RE: Adam's Choice edit 1 - by milo - 07-10-2013, 10:41 AM

RE: Adam's Choice edit 1 - by billy - 07-10-2013, 10:51 AM

RE: Adam's Choice edit 1 - by milo - 07-10-2013, 11:16 AM

RE: Adam's Choice edit 1 - by Brownlie - 07-10-2013, 11:50 AM

RE: Adam's Choice edit 1 - by billy - 07-10-2013, 11:35 AM

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