Sated

[R.C. KITCHENS]

She does kegels for him.

I had to look up Kegel's too. Since Kegel's is a reference to the man
who founded the exercise, I'd suggest capitalization when referencing them.

Three daily sets of ten,
while she’s behind the desk at school or work,

I agree with Todd, "at school or work" seems lengthy to stay with
the starting lines

in traffic or brushing her teeth.

They smoke and eat pizza in bed,
kissing with greasy tongues.
They come with her on top,
pulled tight into his chest.
Appetites earned, they wake to growling bellies.
“What’s for dinner?” he asks.

agree, "Whats for dinner?" breaks it up.. could lose the line
and it would be better.

She worries about her waist,
but relents when he mentions burgers and shakes.
At midnight, she’ll fry potato
with onion and garlic and parsley.

She never gave in easy.
She never watched sports or apologized.
She tolerates things she never did.
Not the porn or reckless driving,
but the faucet left to run,
his tardiness and flirtatiousness.

She never felt sexy.
She never cried over a man before,
never felt an ache crawl from her chest
to her throat and stomach.
She was never sated.
But with the buttered French toast
and his grip on her thigh,
she is voracious, sexy in her gluttony.

I like the piece and how it ties in sex and food with gluttony. I get the feeling by the "Kegel's" that she goes out of her way to please and to also achieve orgasm. Good piece, just some agreements with Billy and Todd and the thought to capitalize Kegels when referenced. Welcome to the forum.