The Saga of a Meanspiritied Son

[fim]

Hi fim, well done on maintaining your thread of thought and keep the spirit of the poem on track.
It was a long read and often I find that i loose interest halfway through. ( I have to confess that i did loose the thread of the argument in the middle but the language you used and the overall flow of the poem was so enjoyable that i just got carried along).
This was def a fun read and i enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

Thank you Cidermaid. I really appreciate your persistence and stamina ... it is a long poem! It is a personal favorite of mine and I would like to craft it so others could enjoy it as well, so ... if you could offer any suggestions that might have prevented you from loosing the thread in the middle, I will get to work on it. I also understand if one read of this lengthy monster was all you can handle! After all we are in the "fun" forum
Cheers.
fim